Maintain the interest and engagement of your reader
You have great characters and a terrific plot, but somehow your story just doesn’t work… It’s too slow. Or maybe too fast!
This Focus On session will take a deep dive into pace, including:
- What is pace?
- How pace needs to change over the course of a story
- How to control pace both within scenes and over the whole story
- What pace is required for the genre of your story?
Every genre and sub-genre has its own requirement in terms of pace. You probably know what yours is – but do you know how to achieve it? Do you know the nuts and bolts of how to control pace so that it builds narrative tension so that readers can’t put your book down?
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Why should you care? The best plot in the world won’t work if the pace is wrong – especially if it’s too slow. This Focus On session will help you give your stories pizzazz and rhythm…until your readers are dancing to your tune!
“I finally understand all the elements of pacing! This seminar exceeded my expectations. Pamela Freeman never fails to provide value for money with a richness of content, generosity and depth of wisdom, and content that is understandable and so actionable.”
Catharine
In this FOCUS ON seminar
Pamela focuses on how to maintain the interest and engagement of your reader through the fundamentals of pace. Is your story too slow or is it too fast? You can lose your reader either way. Pamela looks at the nuts and bolts of how to control pace so that it builds narrative tension and keeps your readers engaged.
Each FOCUS ON seminar explores an important aspect of the art of writing – in an interactive, accessible and efficient way. The session consists of a 1 hour expert presentation plus an additional 30 minute Q&A – designed to entertain, educate and inspire you to improve your craft.
“I now understand the pace required in completing a successful novel. I love the way Pamela presents her material plus it is always so informative.”
Patrizia Smrekar
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